* First Draft *

* My Dream Work * 

               Like every other human throughout the history of this planet, we have always dreams. Dream means remembering and exploring the hopes which are inside us and interpreting its deeper meanings. Dreams are fascinating keys to understand ourselves more deeply.  Many of us are blind to the deeper meanings of their own dreams, so they live in frustration and resort to destructive means.  Dream work is an activity, such as a job, which a person uses physical or mental effort to do, and that you want to happen very much but that is not very likely. Dream Work helps us see what amazing gifts are there. The person makes his best to achieve it for earning money, to his self-realization and give benefits to his religion and country. Dream work is as old as humankind. The ancient Greeks, for instance, believed that dreams could give them the answers of life’s problems, especially for illness and possible remedies. We must aware that nothing will happen unless there is firstly a dream.

            When anyone asked me about my dream work, I think about it in two ways. One of them is that if I will complete my studies and take the master and the other if I won’t complete my studies. In the first way, I hope to complete my studies, travel abroad and take the master in the field of English, psychology or education. So that help me to be a good professor .But in the second way, my dream work will be to become the director of business in the fields of English and computer. As I hope to make a project which involves translation and using computers. I want to translate all kinds of books from Arabic to English and the contrary. I hope to work as Freelancers.

             Everyone has to choose the job according to his capabilities, specialization and personality. I choose these kinds of job as I think that I will fulfill great achievements as they are suitable for my specialization and my capabilities. These jobs need high ability to use computers, knowing many programs of it and capacity to administrate and plan. Also, the person who chooses these kinds of job must be intelligent, superior in speaking English and distinct in the tact and eloquence of speaking. Surely I don’t reach to this level, but I hope and with like and insist we will reach to our goal “Allah Willing”.

            My dream work inquires many qualifications to be able to achieve them. My formal education is a factor that has been the basis for my success. I believe that it will continue to be the tool that will lead me to success in the future. I have to work hard to success. I must be patient, cultured, ambitious and energetic person. I must study all the aspects of English Language and computer and keep up with technology. I have to ask for advice from   the person who has more experience.

        Everybody that still live in this world have their own   ambition and dreams. So there should be tips which help us to achieve them. All of us should study hard as that  help us to catch all the opportunities, start believing in himself, make someday today, talk to others as that can spark ideas and look for "Upgrade Roles”.  Keeping up our enthusiasm, tightening our focus, looking for Opportunities and keeping our open mind are other advices which we have to follow. I am absolutely agree with the sayings which are that your dream won’t find you — you have to seek it , You might not love your dream completely until you get good at it and Once you find your dream , you have to pour yourself into it.

        After all, that I had written that we must chase our ambition, our dream, but not by   the bad way. With hope, ambition, faith in Allah and certainty, we can challenge the odds and melt the iron. To uphold the dream and the hope, you should share dreams with people you trust, don’t expect miracles , don't beat yourself over the head, don’t put rules on dream work and just trust your own instincts.

* Outline *

* My Dream Work *

-   What is the meaning of dream work?

-   What are the tips of dream work ?

-   What is my dream work ?

-   Why do I choose and like this exact work ?

-   What are the qualifications for that work ?

-   What should I do to achieve my dream ?

* What should you feel *

** Happiness is  that feeling comfortable when you enter joy to the hearts of others.

** Write your goals to turn the  aspirations into  facts , to make  the impossible possible and to transfer the dreams into reality.

Write now , what are you waiting for ??

** Do not despair with life, as no life with despair .

* Final Draft *

* The Educational System in Egypt * 

 

                Education is any act that has a great effect on the mind, character or physical ability of individuals. Education is the process by which society deliberately transmits its accumulated knowledge, skills and values from one generation to another. Education gives us the knowledge of the world around us. Education makes us capable of interpreting rightly the things perceived. Education is not about lessons in textbooks. It is about the lessons of life. Education is important because it equips us with all what we needed to achieve our dreams. Education opens doors of brilliant career opportunities. It wipes out all the wrong beliefs in our minds. Knowledge is light and the darkness is ignorance as our messenger said "seeking knowledge is obligatory on every Muslim". Education builds in every individual confidence to take decisions, to face life and to accept successes and failures. Schools and colleges define the basic framework of education. But education does not end here. It is a lifelong process.

             Educational system is the establishment including the plant and equipment for providing education from kindergarten through high school. The components of an educational system are Ministry of education, teacher, student, curriculum, administrator and family and there should be strong relations between them. Educational system aims to achieve good learning to all people, present a high preparation for wise leadership and personal achievement, and open our mind to new ideas.

                Formal education includes pre-primary education, primary education, preparatory education, secondary education and higher education institutions. The purpose of the education of  pre-primary education in Egypt  is to ensure physical, mental and sensory development of children, to acquire good habits, and to prepare children for primary education.

                 Primary education and preparatory education in Egypt  aim to ensure that every child acquires the basic knowledge, skills, behaviors, and habits to become a good citizen. Also, they help the students to be raised with the national moral concepts and to be prepared for life and for the next education level which are suitable for their interests and skills.

                Secondary education   gives students culture, helps them to identify individual and social problems, to search for solutions, to raise awareness in order to contribute to the socio-economic and cultural development of the country and to prepare the students for higher education, for life and for business in line with their interests and skills.

                Egyptian universities  is a higher education which supports students to raise in line with their interests and skills, to do researches in scientific areas, to arrange for all kinds of publications that show the research and examination results and facilitate advancement of science and technology, to finalize the researches and examinations demanded by the government and to make comments.

                There are many problems in our education in every grade. Some of all that I mentioned before don't happen. Also, using violence means against students as that hurt them physically and psychologically. It can't accommodate the current number of students in the classrooms for the increase in the number of students in kindergarten and the lack of enough funds to cover the required increase. The shortage of kindergarten's teachers to accommodate the increase of students. The reluctance of parents from enrolling their children in kindergartens, particularly in disadvantaged areas .Weak economic situation and the inability to pay for books and educational activities. The  spread of illiteracy among parents, and lack of awareness of the importance of early childhood in character building. The care centers often provide low quality of care and guidance supervisors are not qualified, which will reflect negatively on the child-rearing. Because of the lack of good quality at the level of primary and secondary education, market for private tutoring has spread dramatically. Unemployment is also very high, primarily due to lack of education system in providing necessary training under TVET programs. Also our educational system suffers from poor organization of   administrative and its educational methods are undeveloped.

              Our shortcomings and the disadvantages of our educational system    have led to bad consequences in the preparation of future generations. As our nation's future collapsed scientifically and that has a great impact on all other fields. So we became weak intellectually and physically. That gives a chance for our enemies to control us like toys. Our minds become fragile and full of stupidities as we are just imitating the West only in the negative points like in the style of clothing and singing.

              The Egyptian government and the ministry of education have a great role in educational system as it can dominate and control it. They can make the education to be free as it is a necessity and can not be abandoned. They can expand the construction and preparation of schools education classes. In addition that they able to choose the best individuals to work as supervisors and members of the staff in the school. They can ensure the existence of female social workers with the children to help solving any problems, and establish special training courses for education using modern technology. Teacher is important and makes a difference. A good teacher should know their subject, make the lesson interesting, be a good listener, make their class feel at ease, and remain calm. A great teacher has to be knowledgeable, confident, caring, sharing, fair to all students and well-organized.  The student has to resist proving himself, developing his skills and work towards achieving a bright future. Education administrators set educational goals and establish the policies and procedures required to achieve them. They also supervise managers, support staff, teachers, librarians, and other employees. They develop academic programs, supervise students’ educational progress, train and motivate teachers and other staff, and prepare budgets. They also handle relations with parents, students, employers, and the community. The curriculum must be clear, organized, and suitable for every grade and not depended only on keeping .It has to help in developing the skills of the students, and achieve its educational goal. It also should keep up with the technology, but committed on our traditions and our religion rules at the same time. Families' role towards kids is to give them care, love, respect, lead, instruct and to try to form a safe and pleasant environment at their homes. They have to cooperate with the administration of their sons' school to solve any problems which they suffer from.

                Education is one of the most important things for a society to prosper and be safe. An ideal educational system must try to carry out the following aims.  First, training human personality both mentally and physically. Second, schools must be connected closely with families and society. Finally, a perfect education would consist of learning the basic skills as that is necessary for a healthy and happy life, such as social skills, and some technical skills. Also, a great education can determine where your talents lie. If we want Egypt to be real we will need to tackle all bad roots which cause that stopping from achieving.

* First Draft *

* The Educational System in Egypt * 

                   Education is any act or experience that has a great effect on the mind, character or physical ability of individuals. Education is the process by which society deliberately transmits its accumulated knowledge, skills and values from one generation to another.Education gives us the knowledge of the world around us. It develops our awareness of life. It helps us build opinions and have points of view on everything in life. Education makes us cable of interpreting rightly the things perceived. Education is not about lessons in textbooks. It is about the lessons of life. Education is important because it equips us with all what we needed to achieve our dreams. Education opens doors of brilliant career opportunities. It wipes out all the wrong beliefs in our minds. Education is about knowing that everything has a science to it, it is about learning to reason everything till every question meets its answer. Education can lead us to enlightenment. Knowledge is light and the darkness is ignorance as our messenger said "seeking knowledge is obligatory on every Muslim". Education builds in every individual confidence to take decisions, to face life and to accept successes and failures. Schools and colleges define the basic framework of education. Schooling gives us the fundamentals whereas we specialize in fields of our interest. But education does not end here. It is a lifelong process.

                 Educational system is the establishment including the plant and equipment for providing education from kindergarten through high school. The components of an educational system are Ministry of education, teacher, student, curriculum, administrator and family and there should be strong relations between them. Educational system aims to achieve good learning to all people, present a high preparation for wise leadership and personal achievement, and open our mind to new ideas.

           Formal education includes pre-primary education, Primary education, preparatory education, secondary education and higher education institutions. Pre-Primary education in Egypt is for children between 3-6 years of age who are under the age of compulsory primary education. The purpose of this education is to ensure physical, mental and sensory development of children, to acquire good habits, and to prepare children for primary education. Pre-school education is given in kindergartens, and nursery classes. All of these are under the supervision of the Ministry.

                  Primary education in Egypt is compulsory for all boys and girls at the age of 6. It is a former system was six years of compulsory primary school .There are also private schools under State control. In most of the primary schools, foreign language lessons start from 4th class. If the children fail to pass the class, he has to repeat the same class next year. At the end of 11 years, successful students get their Diploma and can go for the Preparatory education. The purpose of primary education is to ensure that every child acquires the basic knowledge, skills, behaviors, and habits to become a good citizen. Also, primary education helps the students to be raised with the national moral concepts and to be prepared for life and for the next education level which are suitable for their interests and skills.

               Preparatory education in Egypt is like primary education in all rules and purposes except that it is after the age of 11, and it consists of three years.  Secondary education in Egypt covers general, vocational and technical high schools that consist of three or five years. It is from 15 to 17 years. The purpose of secondary education is to give students culture, to identify individual and social problems, to search for solutions, to raise awareness in order to contribute to the socio-economic and cultural development of the country and to prepare the students for higher education, for life and for business in line with their interests and skills. Graduates of the high schools can attend universities if they can pass admission exams.

                 Egyptian universities are Republican institutions. Higher education is faculties and institutes of four-years. After a four-year faculty, one can go further for his Master's Degree which lasts for two years .The purpose of higher education is to raise the students in line with their interests and skills, to do researches in scientific areas, to arrange for all kinds of publications that show the research and examination results and facilitate advancement of science and technology, to finalize the researches and examinations demanded by the government and to make comments.

                  There are many problems in our education in every grade. Some of all that I mentioned before don't happen. Also, using violence means against students as that hurt them physically or psychologically. It can't accommodate the current number of students in the classrooms for the increase in the number of students in kindergarten and the lack of enough funds to cover the required increase. The shortage of kindergarten's teachers to accommodate the increase of students. The reluctance of parents from enrolling their children in kindergartens, particularly in disadvantaged areas .Weak economic situation and the inability to pay for books and educational activities. The  spread of illiteracy among parents, and lack of awareness of the importance of early childhood in character building. The care centers often provide low quality of care and guidance supervisors are not qualified, which will reflect negatively on the child-rearing. Because of the lack of good quality at the level of primary and secondary education, market for private tutoring has spread dramatically. Unemployment is also very high, primarily due to lack of education system in providing necessary training under TVET programs. Also our educational system suffers from poor organization of   administrative and its educational methods are undeveloped.

                 Our shortcomings and the disadvantages of our educational system    have led to bad consequences in the preparation of future generations. As our nation's future collapsed scientifically and that has a great impact on all other fields. So we became weak intellectually and physically. That gives a chance for our enemies to control us like toys. Our minds become fragile and full of stupidities as we are just imitating the West only in the negative points like in the style of clothing and singing.

                 The Egyptian government and the ministry of education have a great role in educational system as it can dominate and control it. They can make the education to be free as it is a necessity and can not be abandoned. They can expand the construction and preparation of schools education classes. In addition that they able to choose the best individuals to work as supervisors and members of the staff in the school. They can ensure the existence of female social workers with the children to help solving any problems, and establish special training courses for education using modern technology. Teacher is important and makes a difference. A good teacher should know their subject, make the lesson interesting, be a good listener, make their class feel at ease, and remain calm. A great teacher has to be knowledgeable, confident, caring, sharing, fair to all students and well-organized.  The student has to resist proving himself, developing his skills and work towards achieving a bright future. Education administrators set educational goals and establish the policies and procedures required to achieve them. They also supervise managers, support staff, teachers, librarians, and other employees. They develop academic programs, supervise students’ educational progress, train and motivate teachers and other staff, and prepare budgets. They also handle relations with parents, students, employers, and the community. The curriculum must be clear, organized, and suitable for every grade and not depended only on keeping .It has to help in developing the skills of the students, and achieve its educational goal. It also should keep up with the technology, but committed on our traditions and our religion rules at the same time. Families' role toward kids is to give them care, love, respect, lead, instruct and to try to form a safe and pleasant environment at their homes. They have to cooperate with the administration of their sons' school to solve any problems which they suffer from.

                 Education is one of the most important things for a society to prosper and be safe. Education forms the character and intelligence of individuals. An ideal educational system must try to carry out the following aims. First, training human personality both mentally and physically. Second, schools must be connected closely with families and society. Finally, a perfect education would consist of learning the basic skills as that is necessary for a healthy and happy life, such as social skills, and some technical skills. Also, a great education can determine where your talents lie. If we want Egypt to be real we will need to tackle all bad roots which cause that stopping from achieving.

* Out Line *

* The Educational System in Egypt *

*Introduction :

•       The meaning of  " Education ".
•       The importance of education.
•       The meaning of  " educational system ".
•       The importance of educational system .

*Body :

•       The advantages of educational system in Egypt in :

                -  Nursery school

                - Primary school.
                -  Prep school.
                - Secondary school.
                - University.

•       The disadvantages of educational system in Egypt in :

                -  Nursery school

                - Primary school.

                - Prep school.

                - Secondary school.

                - University.

•      The effects of the educational system on our country.

*Conclusion :

•       What should we do to improve our educational system ?

                - Ministry of Education ,Government.

                - Teachers 
                - Students .
                - Administrator.
                - Curriculum . 
                - Families.

•        The ideal and successful system of education.