الأربعاء، 6 أكتوبر 2010


            " Essay on Water Pollution in Egypt "


                 *Water covers over 70% of the Earth's surface and it is very important resource for people and the environment. Allah said in Holy Quran that " We have made from water every living thing " .The Nile River is one of this resources in Egypt and it is the lifeline of Egypt. But unfortunately, Egypt suffers from water pollution in rivers , drinking water and lakes . Water pollution is the presence of any material in the water that is harmful to humans , plants or animals, or affects its taste and odor, or detracts from any use that can be made of it. There are many types and causes of water pollution which are surface water pollution, oxygen depletion, chemicals , nutrients, groundwater and microbiological. These reasons cause many negative and harmful effects on the health of  humans , plants and animals . We must to look for a cure for that great problem.
           
                 *On one hand, there are many reasons of water pollution . Sewage and wastewater is one of the causes of water pollution which causes problems when people wash chemical substances down the toilet. Sewage often carries harmful viruses and bacteria into the environment causing health problems. Also, Industry is a huge source of water pollution, it produces pollutants like lead , mercury and petrochemicals . Polluted by oil comes from oil spills, shipping , and dumping. Nuclear waste is produced from industrial and scientific processes that use radioactive material as the mining of Uranium and Thorium .The rise in the Earth's water temperature is caused by global warming , bathing in the Nile and canal water , washing pots , cleaning vegetables, poultry and livestock, and even throwing of which is spent from them in the water make a large percentage of water pollution . Pesticides are used in farming to control weeds cause water pollution and poison aquatic life. The air pollution and car fumes have a great effect on the water as it can pollute it. The other cause of water pollution is the use of poisons and explosives and electro-shock for fishing.

                 *On the other hand , all types of water pollution  have  harmful effects on the health of  humans , plants and  animals . Heavy metals from industrial processes are toxic to marine life such as fish , and subsequently to the humans who eat them. Industrial waste often contains many toxic compounds that damage the health of aquatic animals and humans . Microbial water pollution from sewage is a major problem in Egypt, with diseases such as cholera and typhoid fever . Organic matter and nutrients causes an increase in aerobic algae and depletes oxygen from the water . This causes the death of fish and other aquatic organisms. Sulfate from acid rain can cause harm the health of marine life in the rivers and lakes. Rain and irrigation water sends to cultivated land that has been fertilized and treated with pesticides and these pesticides are toxic and pollute the water in a different mode.

                  *Allah said in Holy Quran that “Evil (sins and disobedience of Allah) has appeared on land and sea because of what the hands of men have earned (evil deeds) that Allah may make them taste a part of that which they have done, in order that they may return (by repenting to Allah, and begging His Pardon). So the pollution happened because of us and what we did as we neglected in using water.We have to Keep water by turning off the tap when running water is not necessary.  We must be careful about what you throw down your sink or toilet .We must use environmentally household products in cleaning, and take great care not to overuse pesticides and fertilizers .Least we can do that we don't throw litter into rivers, lakes and find ways of modern technology and water cleaning. The media has to have a role to urge not to pollute the Nile river . Finally, The Egyptian Ministry of Environment must  put sanctions and laws and  take procedures to punish any factory , institution or individual who will disobey the instructions.



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  1. Hi Aya
    An excellent job. Really I congratulate you on your marvellous essay.
    Keep on your good work.
    Access the weblogs of your friends: Tanseem, Wafaa, and Elham and read their essays. Then send commnets and suggestions for improving their essays. If you need help, you can use the editing checklist I uploaded to the class weblog.

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  2. great essay ..aya
    i wish u the best in your life

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  3. Thank you so much Dr. Samah. I will do in shaa Allah.

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  4. Thank you so much Soso. I hope the best to you too in shaa Allah

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  5. what a fruitful and wonderful essay yoyo, this refers to hard working and industrios girl. go ahead i'm waiting for your masterpieces

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  6. Thank you so much my dear Manonty. You just said that as you are my friend and if you don't say that , you know the result hhhhhhhh.

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  7. very very great work from a wonderful writer .I like your examples from the holly Quraan. Good bless you my little writer.

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  8. ohhhh u made me embarrassed as that is great for me . Thank you so much my nice friend Ayoua .

    It is some of what you have Gogo , Sara ,Ayoua and Manon. Thank you so much

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  9. nice job aya . ur essay is very powerful,so keep it going . i expect better and better from u next times

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  10. Thank you so much Fofa. I hope that. I wish all the best and success to you for ever in shaa Allah :)

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  11. excellent essay aya, very organized,understandable and interesting.... good luck

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  12. Thank you so much Gogo and Soso . Allah blesses you. I hope all the best and success for you Soso and Gogo .

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  13. very good essay
    it contains very useful information

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  14. wonderful essay ya aya and your ideas are interesting

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  15. A good essay, I liked your use of some of the Holly Quraan as examples.
    I liked the pictures you used with your essay.
    But there are some corrections that you need to make such as:
    • (don’t start the paragraph with a star) Water covers over 70% of the Earth's surface and it is very important resource for people and the environment.
    Allah said in Holy Quran that " We have made from water every living thing " (write the name of the Suraa and the number of Aaya)
    Egypt suffers from water pollution in rivers , (drinking water) and lakes
    . Water pollution is the presence of any material in the water that is harmful to humans , plants or animals, or affects its taste and odor, or detracts from any use that can be made of it (try to make this log sentence short, u can divide it into 2 sentences).
    nutrients, groundwater and microbiological. These reasons (I prefer a new paragraph for reasons of pollution) cause many negative and harmful
    plants and animals . We must (to) look for a cure for that great problem.
    Sewage and wastewater is (are) one of (among) the causes of water pollution which cause(s) problems when people wash chemical
    Polluted (pollution) by oil comes from oil spills, shipping , and dumping. Nuclear waste is produced from industrial and
    The rise in the Earth's water temperature is caused by global warming , bathing in the Nile and canal water , washing pots , cleaning vegetables, poultry and livestock, and even throwing of which is spent from them in the water make a large percentage of water pollution (very long sentence, make it shorter and clearer).
    Pesticides (that) are used in farming to control weeds cause water pollution and poison aquatic life. The air pollution and car fumes have a great effect on the water as it can pollute it (how can air pollute water). The other cause of
    Egypt, with diseases such as cholera and typhoid fever . Organic matter and nutrients cause( s) an increase in aerobic algae and deplete(s )oxygen from the water . This causes the death of fish and other aquatic organisms. Sulfate from acid rain can cause harm (to) the health

    these pesticides are toxic and pollute (the) water in a different mode.

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  16. nic. essay ayouya i have nothing to add cuz dr\samah brivously mentioned all the notic on your essay

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  17. dear Aya
    God bless you , you have disscused an important issue in an amazing way. The introduction really catch our sight. What I liked most your quotation from Quran .The work shows a hard sense of organization and each pragraph is developed logically from the previous one. But I found the introduction and the conclusion are very long
    Isuggest you could summrize them in their content. All in all, keep up .

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  18. great work ayooy. Your blog is extremely beauti3ul and organised . I hope u compldte your success.

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  19. hi aya your essay is really excellant one .also it is very onganized and the words are very simple and direct. Your introduction and conclusion are attractive.

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  20. peace be upon you yoya, it's really a wonderfull essay,as it has a clear purpose,it's well-organized, your introduction is comprehensive and attractive, your sentences are varied in length and structure, you mention this topic from all aspects.i'm sure i'll read more and more of your fabulous essays.

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  21. hi youya really your eassy so good .the purpose is clear,your voc is really easy,it is well-organized

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